HomelandHomeland by *thelanyi
We'll start with the fence. The fence is the main part of this. Build it high, build it wide, build it good. Without your fence, you will get nowhere. Because I can promise you, if you get this right, you'll have hundreds of ragged parasites begging to get in. And you can't afford to let any old cheapskate in. You need the hard working cream of the crop.
See, let me show you my fence. 7 feet high, covered in barbed wire and it goes all the way around. I tell you, when I started all this – before the media got interested – I had cops hammering on this fence day in, day out. But could they bring it down? No. Because I built it strong. And no one, cop, parasite or otherwise gets in without my say-so. And they're gonna look bad on Fox News if they do.
Around my borders here you can see I've got the Smiths at number 47, the Beattys at number 51 and the Milburns out the back. Really though, my country's neighbour is America. My little property her
EnterThe man sat at the computer with a rigid calm. Reaching for his son’s hand he said;Enter by *thelanyi
“I wanted you to do this with me, I don’t feel like I can do it by myself.”
He placed their hands over the enter key on the keyboard and looked into the boy’s face.
“When we press this button, we’re going to have to get in the car and go. We are probably not going to come back for a very long time. You’re going to miss a lot of things too. We aren’t taking the tv with us, we aren’t ever going to be stuck behind an old lady in the supermarket again, you’re not going to have peanut butter and jam on toast again – although, that’s an American concoction. I’ve been meaning to show you Vegemite. Maybe we’ll take a jar – hell, you probably won’t have toast again. We aren’t taking the toaster.”
He took a deep breath and continued.
“There’s two ways this could all end. I might be
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